Reviews for Noble Effect
billymom2 chapter 6 . 7/26
he already fucked up the second he let his armor and body be scanned you stupid fucking author
Cooldude101011 chapter 8 . 7/25
You did quite alright in the fight scenes
Ronin Kenshin chapter 8 . 7/25
awes0meness
475213 chapter 2 . 7/23
Even with the author’s notes about it, reading about an AI left on a planet in the process of glassing sending coordinates to a ship to go directly to Sol just made my inner Halo nerd go REEEEEEE. I do like where this is headed, though.

Although, why not have Auntie Dot upload herself to the prowler? After all, the prowler is designed to be as undetectable as possible in space, and it could probably stay in line of sight with the closest laser comm array, probably at Sword Base, for long enough before the Covenant fleet notices it.
RandomReader chapter 7 . 7/21
Yes, Cole Protocol is a big thing. Six should initially be very hesitant to share information. Also, it is not believable they are just asking a complete stranger to give them his armor for study as first order of business. That's just not how people interact.
A normal person would recognise that Cole Protocol makes no sense in a place where there is no UNSC whose secrets could be protected in the first place. But Six is a Spartan, totally indoctrinated to make sure he never questions orders, no matter what those orders are. It should take him longer. That brings me to his reaction to non Covenant aliens. While the war would have led to widespread xenophobia this is Halo and not 40k. There is no "thispersonisnothumanmustkill" ideology in the UNSC. He should feel mistrust, but not hostility. The Covenant is the enemy, and ONLY the Covenant. While Cole protocol states that when meeting new aliens one should assume that they are hostile it also forbids attacking them first. (but states to be prepared to defend against them). Cole protocol is all about the survival of humanity and anyone doing anything that could start a war with yet another alien power puts more human lives in danger. That Six wants to kill the first alien he sees regardless wether the alien in question belongs to the Covenant goes against Cole protocol and thus against his ingrained training/indoctrination.
LadyKDQ chapter 6 . 7/21
Please don't change noble six insignia to alliance because it doesn't feel like Six would abandon his parent faction for another just because they're human. Also why is every Spartan so willing to follow shepard. Can you make one of the spartan be stubborn and not follow their command because they aren't UNSC and they don't follow orders from someone who isn't UNSC. Sorry I just thought the Spartans wouldn't comply with orders given to them outside UNSC and not follow them. I just feel that they are stubborn with following authority and following so willingly.
LadyKDQ chapter 7 . 7/21
Love it great chapter. I like to put a request can their be a halo and transformers crossover because they're that many especially completed. The autobots after their war their is a groundbrigde malfunction they and they're human friends are sent to a different reality were humanity doesn't trust aliens after the covenant war. The autobots try to help them loose they're fear on aliens. They learn a lot about this humanity and their importance in their galaxy and beyond. Or where in the Halo universe humanity reaches tire level 1 species and know about traveling through dimensions and keep developing their technology. As well as they have set up colonies in those dimensions and one of those is the Transformers Prime universe where they hide in the shadows and observed the cybertronians and when the conflict escalate to far and draw other innocent species as well as earth into their conflict that the UNCS and Covenant Separist( join and one government you can come up with the name) star to hunt them down since they see the grey area between the two factions. They cybertronians must prove to them that they deserve to exist and that they can change from warframes into peace keeping society. They must stand through obstacle through obstacle. You can get the picture and that is a story ÍIwill like to see and I see you have that. You don't have to do it if you don't want to. I'm just throwing this idea out here to anyone who might be interested. Sorry for the long paragraph. Something along these lines also this an idea that everyone can have a go for it because I don't trust myself to write a good story because I never written one before. Let me know what everyone else thinks of this idea.
UltraMickey chapter 7 . 7/21
Short chapter, but a welcomed one nonetheless
Cullen walsh chapter 6 . 7/19
Ok first and foremost this one is from me finishing the chapter.

In regards to the covenant and the species that make up its ranks nothing wrong they're all that is readily available information into military within the UNSC so there's nothing to worry about there.

In regards to when shepherd let's get the alliance symbol on your Ahmed make you look more in line with the rest of us myself and her more than a few other people will say where do you want to mount your skullthis one is a bit negative but respect the individual don't force them into it unless you're giving them like it mass effect 2 a second skin in type that does nothing to combat but just changes the appearance of the individual.

Onto a more personal note names do you have any idea how personal a name is to a spartan people like Sgt Avery Johnson earned the right the John's name shepherd cross every member of the Normandy sr2 has not earned what would be needed to use their name outside of the documentation for hire apps to look at Sheppard is not a captain she would not be high enough by even bioequivalence see into the system alliance from mass effect to use his name.

Now the last one on my mind with what I've read in this chapter it looks like you're going to be following mass effect 3 canon storyline but in regards to that don't look up another fan fixing called once a rocky always a rocky. It helps so what an individual from another universe coming in effects to the canon storyline and what elements from the university going to change or adapt to the new individual.

On regards to shepherd her choices what classes as a paragon or renegade.

firstly for the choices yes they would like to be really good to see what choice is this Shepard has made as well as how far are you you wanted to go with the mass effect side of things and not just halo.

secondly in regard to classes having shepherd be a sentinel, soldier or vanguard will help you get around the hiccup of her lifting noble 6 in full armour not fully will give you the grounds to do so also than the other three classes.

thirdly goes to paragon or Renegade based on what's been read so far actions taken by shepherd you are putting her towards the paragon side of things. But we know shepherd in this could have been paragon in mass effect 1 then go full Renegade in mass effect 2 lastly to what I said above it looks like he's a paragon in this one.

now I hope you're not going to claim something negative when you reply I love both universes I really do do I hope this criticism can help you improve more so than what you're doing so far last but by no means least I hope you have a wonderful day.
bladebrony chapter 7 . 7/21
This chapter is "good" I like how six is staying caution when dealing with aliens and willing to attack them if they are in arms reach, and hope that personality stay since Six been fighting aliens for DECADES, he can cooperate with them but that doesn't mean his friends with them. I'm still feeling uneasy about the idea of changing six insignia of UNSC to System Alliance, it feels like six permanently leaving his parent organization for a organization he DOESN'T EVEN KNOW, I know Noble six is very loyal to UNSC and Earth but it just not ease my feeling about the insignia thing.

But still, I do enjoy reading this story and good luck.
Cullen walsh chapter 6 . 7/19
Ok so firstly for calling us out fanboys in a negative way I just have to say hey. Secondly just because of wear fanboys other than fangirls doesn't mean we don't love the IPs of one or both universes.

In regards to what you say about whining about protocol let's look at the mass effect universe for the first example you find a profession artefact and you sell it on eBay (Morgan sarcasm) the horror what are you doing is what you're doing with the characters here.

In regards to now for the halo side of things it's like instead of the military defending themselves they are going up to the covenant open transmission and giving away everything every colony everything about the military a projection of how long it will take them to wipe us out the UNSC all with a smile of ignorance and no care to human life.

Example for the United States of America tourists coming in from country that doesn't like the United States of America they woke up to a missile silo containing nuclear warheads and the God has made us stop unauthorised entry it says oh yeah just go on in so you can blow us to hell.

I don't look to be negative but your breakdown and complete ignorance of protocol for both how would be in the real world mass effect and halo so you need to explain.

Now I've made put this in a previous of you but you need to keep continuity with what you changed switching from a pelican to it being a Prowler then back to a pelican then back to a Prowler you need to keep continuity.

Now with my hand rant on the heading taken care of time for me to read this chapter please review upon that.
Jctherebel chapter 7 . 7/21
Good chapter
Cooldude101011 chapter 7 . 7/21
Nice
Misfit Delta chapter 4 . 7/20
I do not understand why you would have Six behave this way in this chapter. A soldier, a Spartan, is thrown into the unknown, surrounded by people and aliens he does not know, and he rolls over and gives up his weapons and his armor because...why exactly? This is the Lone Wolf, the man who made entire colonies disappear, he is more than capable and in all likelihood, willing to cut through everyone aboard the Normandy like chaff if they attempted to strongarm him. Having him behave in the way he does is rather immersion breaking in my opinion.

Perhaps the most aggravating is how it kills all the great tension you could have had. Why not let that stand off of the two sides who don't trust each other continue while Shepard shows her diplomatic skills and abilities to massage them all into working together.

Other than that, it's a solid story overall, keep up the good work.
xxtanzeelxx chapter 6 . 7/19
Nah decided to give you another chance but you ruined it.

Six is too comfortable around them and is giving away highly classified intel without a second thought.

Can't be bothered to read this if you aren't going to try and make it good.
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