Ah! The sweet sight of tension! When they finally get together for real they’re going to break the bed from the build-up. ;)

Best chapter yet! Really loved all of it!

It's great seeing flashbacks of Shawn and his team. Does Shawn have a nickname with his team? Cards, Reads and Coop?

Now that Shawn knows why Lassie broke up with him (which was not Shawn's fault) I hope Shawn and Lassie talk about it. Shawn has more right to be angry and hurt than Lassiter. Shawn was on a mission and Lassiter knew that. Lassiter cheated on Shawn and broke up with him without telling him. Just moved on and got engaged like the last two years were meaningless. Poor Shawn.

That is a lot of fodder for some serious emotional whump.I can't wait!

I'm very excited to read your story chapter! :D

Ooh! Goody! What's with the break-in? Very interesting.

I really enjoyed this! Great getting to see some of what happened to break them up.

Very enjoyable chapter.

You did an amazing job writing this chapter.
Thanks for the update

How could you leave us like that? I'm dying to know what you have in mind for this story!

I'm excited to read more! I noticed that chapters three and four were just repeats of one and two. Your story says it's completed, but that's not true right? I'd love to read more.

Love the story put chapter 3 is the same as chapter 1 it didn’t have spelling bee part one it was a repeat chapter but love the story and can’t wait for the next chapter

Yes! More please!

I would actually prefer that it wasn't a rewrite of an episode because I am in love with the idea of Shawn as Special Forces. So HOT! But beggars can't be choosers. Lol!

I did enjoy this and would love for you to write more. Pretty please?

Thank you!

This story is great! I love the idea of Shawn being in the military, hope you update soon!

Amazing story! Hope you update soon

That was a fun story and I’d happily read more. Thanks for sharing.