Reviews for Force of Magic
Guest chapter 21 . 7/21
nice chapter
Spiral-Voltron-Zero0Q1 chapter 21 . 7/21
Awesome work
Just make the chapter longer next time ok?
1jesus chapter 21 . 7/21
Nice one.
Thomas Drovin chapter 21 . 7/21
Hey there welcome back! There's no need to apologise for your absence, with all the current craziness in the world these days that's no surprise. Also if you want to work on your OTHER stories besides this one that's understandable too.

Now for my review...while Trezac and his friends continue their journey...I fear that their problems are going to get WORSE. Not JUST with Viren and his Inquisitor 'friend' fooling around with that mirror...but what General Amaya saw while at her post...I have no doubt that Imperial Reinforcements have arrived...the question is...WHO is with them? More Inquisitors...or worse? I fear for what Amaya will find...I sure hope Trezac sense the fact he'll have more 'visitors' too! See you next update whenever you can manage it so I can find out what happens next! Good Health, Clear Body, Strong Mind!
Mandalore the Survivor chapter 20 . 6/24
Hmm not bad, not bad at all, quite the potential story and I think you got the characters thus far quite spot on, most certainly vibes that fairly remind me of Avatar in ways XD Would like to see Trezac fresh out more though as I feel there could be more that the team could learn in regards of the galaxy, what the Clone Wars was like, what more there of the Force as the subject of seeing how the Powers of Xadia against Dark Magic has lot of parrels to looking at the thousands years of war between the Sith and the Jedi that has torn around the galaxy and in ways where you see both sides are wrong in their way.

While yes I can certainly agree that Dark Magic is clearly something truly corrupted and has much similarities to Sith Alchemy, the arrogance however that Sol Regum displayed and his very willingness to kill thousands of innocents just for the sake of destroying darkness has similarities to where the ancient Jedi had mistakes that would come back to haunt them and how their own arrogance in their teachings has caused the falls of once great Jedi Knights like Freedon Nadd, Exar Kun, Ulic Qel Droma, Revan, Malak, Darth Ruin, Count Dooku, Xanatos, Aurra Sing, and etc, so many unique lessons and history that has quite the similarities with what the Dragon Prince has presented about the Human/Elven conflict.

As I find it very frustrating there's not enough points being shown that we as Humans will always do what we must to survive and the fact the Dragons and Elves who are of Sol Regum's thinking were perfectly willing to allow humanity suffer and still think of them as lesser beings reminds me greatly of what can be said about the Elves/Dragons from Elder Scrolls in a degree *In Elder Scrolls they were far more immoral and did truly horrid things to humanity and other races* Quite curious to see where Trezac will find himself seeing from all this considering the little bit of detail he's now seen from Lujanne though I do feel there could've been more explored of what I can only imagine Lujanne's curiosity to the Force.

Ah yes Viren, while ultimately has shown he will do what he feels is necessary to protect humanity, he clearly shows himself to have strong views in align of ultranationalism that is honestly in ways comparable to looking at certain Fallen Jedi who had either fall or in rare cases like Revan, chose the Dark Side in believing it would accomplish their goals further, Viren pretty much followed their examples when he chose to dive further into Dark Magic and working with Aaravos and the fact it's not out of for power but just for humanity to flourish and grow shows some very unique possibilities to what now he's now gonna do with the Empire.

I like thus far what you've done with his interactions with Eleven as I felt was quite spot on and his reactions to Eleven's sadism certainly paints of how he'll react to the Empire's cruel methods but it also paints how he'll likely come to view about the Empire brings Order and Stability and meeting the more respectable Imperial Officers I'm sure will give him reasons to thinking that the Empire is the best way to bring their world into the larger galaxy as he sees more of their advance technology and understanding, I very much looking forward into seeing how you're handle that, would be quite something to see Viren adopting Imperial influences and maybe under fulfilled agreements for their alliance, commanding Stormtroopers of his own but that's all up to you.

One thing I will say I feel there could be maybe more shown with Trezac's past as there are some things I'm rather curious and confused bit as to how exactly was he able to survive against Darth Vader or what exactly did he do in the Clone Wars, what kind of relations he had with the Clones? How he felt about their betrayal, how he felt through the force of Jedi dying everywhere that would no doubt leave scars on his mind, does he feel that the Jedi Order failed in someways when seeing how the public turn against them or seeing their mistakes coming back to haunt them? Those kind of stuff I just can't help but wonder in regards of his character since he's aware of Luke and Leia and if did his presence in the storyline caused any certain changes? Still overall that's only thing I can really say there, still wish ya the best of luck and look forward into seeing how he'll affect the conflict between Xadia and Humanity.

If you were interested, I did had some suggestions if you wish? It's up to you, I understand if not but otherwise we can talk on PM if you wish in regards of them. I wish ya the best of luck to the story and stay safe out there, did also has some links to videos that do help show kinda what I meant before in regards of the Sith/Jedi conflict and just some Star Wars bits that might interest ya. Good luck, till next time.
PAR KOTE BAL IJAAT BE MAND'ALOR!

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The Jedi Purge WORSE than Order 66 we all Forgot about

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Why this Sith Faction was the ONLY Thing Revan Truly Feared

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All Force Abilities Sith COULDN’T Use that Jedi COULD

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All the Gritty Clone Battle-Fronts that WEREN’T Shown in Star Wars: The Clone Wars

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THE MANDALORIANS (History and Culture) Explored

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Revan - Decoded
Chakanta chapter 20 . 6/22
Please update Evolution
Guest chapter 20 . 6/20
Please continue Evolution and half-breed
Guest chapter 20 . 6/17
Update Evolution and half-breed
Spiral-Voltron-Zero0Q1 chapter 20 . 6/17
Awesome chapter dude
But could you make the next one longer?
Thomas Drovin chapter 20 . 6/16
Welcome back! I see that Trezac's little strategy to show Callum and Ezran just WHO'S side Claudia and Soren were on worked! An illusion of Rayla and the Princes thanks to Lujanne to keep them distracted while the REAL people get away with Zym! Nicely done! I felt bad for Callum HOWEVER...I just hope what Trezac said to Claudia gets through to her and her brother...before its too late that is. For I see that Viren and the Eleventh Sister are SLOWLY making progress with that mirror...and I think Eleven is going to get the jest of it LONG before Viren does! *Chuckles* See you next chapter to see what happens next! Good Health, Clear Body, Strong Mind!

PS: Who helped out Claudia and Soren? Someone from the their own world or the Empire? See you next update whenever you can manage it so I can find out!
gabeherndon308 chapter 20 . 6/16
oh wow now that eleventh sister knows about aaravos and is plotting who knows what which could be bad and excited to see trezac fighting claudia and soren
Dexter chapter 19 . 6/14
Jedi vs Sorceress

Cladia: I always wondered who would win if we fight Trezac.

Trezac: Then you are a bad friend.
Guest chapter 19 . 5/30
Please update Evolution, i want to see what happened next
ddkeac chapter 19 . 5/29
Nice chapter
Thomas Drovin chapter 19 . 5/28
Welcome back! I see that poor Trezac is sensing disturbances in the Force which is affecting his sleep...however he's managing it to the best of his abilities. Right now he's got a plan to work out IF Claudia and Soren are actually 'on the level' with them on wanting to bring Zym back with them. Can't WAIT to see what he has in mind! See you next update whenever you can manage it! Good Health, Clear Body, Strong Mind!
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