I can’t beleive you were right about this! That is crazy. It was just revealed and I said to my mom last week that I read a story based on the theory that Eve was the sister of The Girl in the Box. She agreed, but I didn’t think it would actually happen. I just hope he doesn’t accidentally kill her. :/

Hi there! Well, this certainly didn’t go as I was thinking it would lol I was picturing this centering around her thoughts after his hallucination and a revelation of her connection to things (because I don’t believe she’s not connected somehow). This definitely takes a much darker turn and puts Malcolm in a more precarious position than he is in now. How to explain what happened and not have people make that jump to him finally giving in to his killer instincts will be difficult.

Eve’s last words are powerful because they echo what Malcolm has heard for years. It’s what he fears most and strives hardest to not become. Now he’s got blood on his hands from an accident he couldn’t avoid being part of and memories of another body haunting him. It’s a lot for someone who already sees themselves as unfixable.

Really nice job!

This is really good :)

Ooo that went nice and dark. I really liked it.