i cant wait to read more of this story , im hooked please keep up the good work.

I love this story so much
Just did my third re read of the chapters already up.

We miss you and your awesome story. Hope all is ok.

This was really well done. I can not wait to read the ending

I probably sound like a broken record, but I was so excited to see that you had given us another chapter! I'm glad you are still writing, and I'm very much enjoying this story and look forward to more of it.

More? We miss your story. Takes us away from reality. Hope you are well.

I loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved it.

I loved loved loved loved loved it

Pfft ! Is not a fault. Don’t say anything. Thanks !

Kill me please. Why ? I don’t know. Because I written at school ! My teacher would have killed me !

I just saw my fault juge fan of. GOD ! Huge fan of ! It’s time to go back at school
Nothing, forget please !
When Magnum and Higgins will be together ?
Magnum ! Wake up !

Hi ! I’m crazy about your story, please keep going ! I’m French but I’m very juge fan of Magnum P.I, so I had to read fan fiction about Magnum and Higgins. I hope they will be together, someday.

I'm absolutely loving this story.

I am really enjoying this story! Really excellent writing and such a complex story. I love the way you've captured the camaraderie between the characters. It's just like watching an episode... definitely a two-parter! Can't wait to read what happens next.

Magnum s still hold on that's good. He's not better but not worse. And Irina is doing a good job just hope this severs guy doesn't suspect anything as the night goes on.