Reviews for The Men From Onyx
scottusa1 chapter 45 . 7/27
Great chapter. Keep it up. Laters.
Dasgun chapter 45 . 7/27
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axel100 chapter 45 . 7/26
Part of me wonders if Ironwoods reaction to Dominions nukes was a little too subdued. Forget the fact that they allow the Dominion unrestrained destructive potential. From his point of view, the humans of Remnant cling to life in the face of the looming presence Grimm. Think of all the wasted potential spent by Remnant just to keep the Grimm at bay. The humans of the UNSC never had to endure such a pervasive threat throughout it's long history. And what did Earth do with its blessed Grimm free existence? They developed weapons capable of destroying their own world many times over. I his reaction to the Hiroshima shadow people would be.
Project Ray chapter 45 . 7/26
It's not a complain but rather a question. How many words do you use in the story? For each chapter I mean.
War chapter 45 . 7/26
When is the main unsc going to arrive
PaladinSans chapter 45 . 7/26
MOAR PLS
Guest chapter 45 . 7/26
I am so happy and surprised by the new chapter, and how soon it was posted! Thanks a bunch!

Tyrian's little mission for Salem is all for nothing really, considering what the Dominion has planned for not only Atlas, but for all of Remnant. Once the Dominion gets started on the satellites, those early warning radars are going to be obsolete.

It seems like Richard is going to be told some very scary truths about Remnant. I love how the thought of recruiting the Dominion, or at least Richard, into Ozpin's inner circle occurred after the SDC conflict. Now that everything on that front is settled, and that Atlas and the Dominion are allies, Ironwood can put some serious thought into bringw them in and telling them the truth.
PoofyOhio chapter 45 . 7/26
Yay! More Ruby and Ben interaction, honestly glad to see the light hearted phone(scroll?) call. Also Yu is back, which is good, always did like her character. No real criticism I can think of.
Dragon lord Syed 101 chapter 45 . 7/26
well things just got real also Tyrian
DarkMastermc chapter 45 . 7/26
Good chapter

"While Remnant had known about the concept of radioactivity and its potential health hazards for some time" since when do they know radioactive?

When is Ruby going to be hit with reality? And would be Ben show her war, death, dying comrades, the world is not black and white and out there their are way worse things than Grimm?

I'm glad that aura doesn't work in HALO universe. Is Dominion and some characters from Renmant ( btw who are going to be ? ) Learn that aura cannot be used in the HALO universe
Combine117 chapter 45 . 7/26
YES! It's time for shit to go down!

I wonder how this will play out, especially with what Salem's group is planning.

I just hope the plans (Ironwood seeing the Elite, and the ladies night out) don't get affected, I'm curious to see what the encounters and interactions will have in store.
PaladinSans chapter 44 . 7/25
MOAR PLS
Steelrain66 chapter 44 . 7/22
You know seeing both you and Dust of Echoes both do a conference on the same island is kinda funny but well it's the best choice for such things.
scottusa1 chapter 44 . 7/22
Good chapter. Keep it up. Laters.
SPRTN544 chapter 44 . 7/21
Awesome chapter and it's nice to see Ironwood finally seeing the difference and gap between Atlas and UNSC military styles.
The UNSC has a huge advantage not just technologically and scientifically but also how it's structured, almost everything is utilitarian. Not just equipment wise but also how every person on the ship operates as well. Atlas, and in general the rest of Remnant, tends to lean more on form over function in lot of cases. Either from a personal or cultural perspective anyway. Then comes to mind the three 'S': simple, sustainable, and standardized. (quoted this from a youtube vid 'Soviet Gear - Why it Didn't Die')
Again for both sides it boils down to functionality, cost efficiency, and reliability in all spectrum's.

It's a very intriguing chapter although I figure it's the beginning before it gets deeper and ideology and views starts changing and clashing further down. Can't wait for the next one.
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