| Reviews for The Restaurant |
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  Guest chapter 6 . 1/8 great story. are you planning on making more? :) |
| Cage-cat chapter 6 . 12/11/2019 such a cliffhanger! |
| Cage-cat chapter 3 . 12/10/2019 this is a great story from what i've read! This also really gives me a strong idea of how the mercs would be, since I'm also writing a fanfic of Tf2 and I feel insecure on it. Encore! |
 Megalibrarygirl chapter 6 . 11/14/2019 Finally! Thanks for giving us more to read! But now there's a new cliff hanger? ;) |
| Megalibrarygirl chapter 5 . 2/27/2019 I enjoyed this longer chapter and the additional adventure. It's humorous how quickly things happen in the story: they see an ad, win the vacation, go on the plane and immediately ruin everything! One quibble: to descend is to go down. So the plane should start its "ascent" instead. :) |
| BaileyS chapter 5 . 2/26/2019 This chapter was very funny! I really liked it. I hope you write more like these. What kind of creature attacks them? |
| AAGuy chapter 5 . 2/25/2019 Yee boy chapter 5! The SMG part, xd. |
| AA chapter 1 . 2/16/2019 this is good very good i say good |
| WunderbarSpy chapter 4 . 1/28/2019 this is some good shit |
| stankyledeansam chapter 4 . 1/27/2019 this is good keep going |
| Megalibrarygirl chapter 3 . 1/15/2019 My favorite part is where the soldier asks if the family lives in a box. Can you add more details about what kind of food there are cooking? What does the restaurant look like? Who is doing the cooking? |
| Jonesie chapter 1 . 1/7/2019 Why did they get fired? I'm glad they are going to build a restaurant. I want to see all of the mercs dealing with bureaucratic red tape! I bet they make the people at city hall cry. :D |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/5/2019 What happens next? What kind of restaurant? |
| Megalibrarygirl chapter 2 . 1/5/2019 What kind of restaurant? Way to keep me waiting! :P |
