| Reviews for A Helping Hand |
|---|
kawaiihinahime chapter 7 . 7/25 wow, finally an update!thank you for this, its good chapter, thought u really left us forgottenT_T looking for more chapters anytime soon, and congratulations for finishing your degree |
RavenShadow chapter 7 . 7/20 Thank you so much for the update I have been really looking forward to reading more. congratulations on graduating capstone projects are time consuming rough exhausting and quite stressful. You work so much on it, when it’s over it’s like stepping out of a cave into the daylight for the first time in many months. Nevertheless, great story! |
keller.blair1 chapter 1 . 7/20 So Sakura wants the genocidal killer who would murder them all to go free |
will538 chapter 6 . 5/5 cuando mo actualizas? |
Dethkey chapter 3 . 3/12 Why is Naruto so underrated after saving the world? I get he asleep but doesn't seem like he's shown respect he deserves. I don't like the whole arranged marriage thing for hinata especially when the clan picks Some one over the potential Naruto pick, it's like a bad draft. At this point of time Naruto is of the most value being savior of the world. Ima keep reading now, I'm hooked. |
Dethkey chapter 1 . 3/12 Why wouldn't hinata leave a clones or report the old lady? |
marquis.shax chapter 1 . 9/17/2019 I don't understand what you meant in your authors note at the start of the story about canon not going into what happened with Naruto's arm. Sure he had to live with a prostethic or no arm at all for an unspecified amount of time but Tsunade was able to make Naruto a new arm using some of Hashirama's DNA so now he's got two arms again even though the other one kinda looks like a Zetsu and is kept wrapped in bandages |
nightwind83 chapter 6 . 9/16/2019 well definitely the best version that u had so far. |
RavenShadow chapter 6 . 9/10/2019 Thank you for the new chapter, I have really missed this story! |
SocialSuicideGirl chapter 6 . 9/10/2019 Heyyyy thanks for spruiking my story, so nice of you! Also, I'm really excited by where this chapter is going! I don't know where that is exactly, but it's going to be fun to find out! I really love the frank and simple way Naruto explained his feels to Hinata at the end there, it seemed really in character and also within the scope of how he'd be able to understand and articulate that kind of thing given his limited experience of people showing him affection and stuff. It was really adorable the way he kind of danced around and shied away from saying actual smoochy-mushy words until after he managed to fish out a response from Hinata that they were on the same page even after everything that had happened between them, I think that was really super well done! It felt like such a real moment! And so aww! :) |
kawaiihinahime08 chapter 6 . 9/8/2019 this chapter was so great, I loved and enjoyed it, finally, they both felt ans shared romantic feelings, and for me, this only means one thing, they both can face whatever circumstances awaits for them when they return home because they already have each other, yay, excited for the next chap. And oh, don't worry, I'll wait for ur updates no matter how long it'll take because I fucking love this story so much, at least, don't abandon us ok |
Dexter-83 chapter 6 . 9/8/2019 No doubt you are writing this well and I enjoyed it. But! if you would like to take this story and make something unexpected out of it I suggest you could let them run off to the west. Their is a fiction on this site where Naruto runs away with Karin to the west and it's epic. Also has quite a lot follows. The west will open a whole new world for you where you are the true creator. Anyway if you don't like the idea no worries I still appreciate your writing and the effort you put into it. Thank you for writing |
jenuzumaki chapter 6 . 9/8/2019 That Koga dude should be punished by Ibiki and Anko painfully I hope. I think after the war, there should be no more Naruto haters. I would be okay with the Hyuga elders and the head hating him. Because he was meddling with their plans. So Koga wanted Hinata for himself, then all the more reason for him to suffer. And with all the things done by Naruto, he should be rewarded at least, he’s the war hero. I wonder where Hinata and Naruto would go for their vacation. Well he had a lot of friends outside Konoha, who would be willing to take them or even hide them once they learned of their predicament. |
lala1224 chapter 6 . 9/7/2019 Glad you found time to update this... so far it’s not what I expected but I like it |
SocialSuicideGirl chapter 5 . 7/7/2019 So first of I like your story, of course :) ...but I have to say, I got a bit confused because there seemed to be 1 distinct tone at the beginning of the story, and then it suddenly kind of veered off in a whole other direction and seemed to become more of a wish fulfillment thing, yknow like oh wouldn’t it be great if Hinata finally put her sister in her place, what if she stood up for herself in front of big scary people like Anbu... it was still fun to read, but yeah I feel like I have to say it feels like you set out with 1 story in mind and then ended up with another... the stuff with the Hyūga elders was also a bit out there, but I guess it was an okay plot device to get to Naruto watching over Hinata and doing borderline pervy things after what she did to him... it almost evens things out in a way... these MeToo times made that stuff a bit more uncomfortable to read admittedly... Anyway, the story is going in a cute direction now, hopefully there’s more cuteness & good stuff to come :) |