Reviews for In Another Life |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, everyone was so mature and grownup – it was so refreshing! I was expecting the scene with Addison, Derek, and Mark to be so tense and awkward, but I was pleasantly surprised. They've all come such a long way since the beginning of the story, and it's so nice to see everyone stepping and doing the right thing and being there for Faith. I'm looking forward to seeing how you wrap this story up! Thanks for posting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww. This was such a sweet chapter. I love that Mark finally got to see his daughter. And good thing he called and that they’re all talking and communicating. I’m going to miss this story when it ends. Can’t wait for the epilogue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good thing that the story is almost done. It was sweet but the end is predictable. You seem to be obsessed with the idea of giving Addek daughters. It's a shame since you seem to be talented. Very talented. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I love this chapter so much. Their conversation is so authentic and Addek-like. Will Mark see Faith in the next chapter? Can’t wait! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks so much for updating! I love the way you wrote Addison and Derek's conversations in this chapter. Their insecurities are still there, but they seem committed to each other and their daughter as they navigate being new parents together. It felt very realistic. And I agree – I'm a bit of a health nut, but when you're celebrating (especially big things), it's gotta be junk food! Hope you're staying well and thanks for the update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great going! I was wondering if she was going to give birth or not or not. Great job. Very good chapter! |
![]() ![]() i said i said 'HOW ABOUY NOW. i SAID'HOW ABOUT ...NOw ? I SAIN "I SAIDI SAID HOW NOW MAYBE NOw? NOW? PLEASE? ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks so much for posting! I'm sorry it took me so long to read this, but I'm really glad I finally did. This chapter was so good. I especially liked the interaction between Derek and Mark. I love how things aren't magically back to normal. The tension between them feels really realistic, and you captured their strained relationship so well in your dialog. Looking forward to more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It’s great to see Derek and Mark in each other’s presence and are not trying to kill each other. Haha!I hope they’ll be friends again. One day. Baby steps. Thanks so much for the update. I truly enjoyed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks so much for updating! I appreciate your commitment to finishing this story. This chapter was great! I think my favorite part was the beginning and how Addison's first thoughts were about the bedsheets - haha! I also liked the distinction you drew between being a doctor and being a patient. And, of course, I always love supportive Derek! Looking forward to more. Hope your holidays were great and your year is off to a good start! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very great chapter. Baby is finally here. Yay! But I would have liked to see Mark’s reaction too. Getting the news that Addison’s in labour. Overall, I love it. |
![]() ![]() Well, that little statement sure woke him up fast. A very well written and enjoyable story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow addison gives birth to a baby girl? How original NOT. You mentioned something about a new story? What will the story be about? About Addy having a daughter again? It's not like you havent done that before. Glad when this one is done. It was nice to read for awhile. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can’t wait to “see” the baby! Yaaaayyyy! What a great chapter! But I’m curious. Will the story go so far as the baby girl knowing that Mark is actually her father? Will she know about that at all? Or you’ll have an epilogue for that? Anyway, looking forward to the next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely story but I agree with the reader who said that fics where Addison gets a daughter have been done to death. I wish you had gone a different path with this fic since you already have a story where Addison gets to raise a girl. Seems like writers are obsessed with the daughter story-arc. At least boy/girl twins would have been nice. Bummer. Im out as well. |