| Reviews for Kiwi |
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  Guest chapter 2 . 3/23 i feel as though i should point out that snakes don't actually have eye lids |
 Wicken25 chapter 5 . 12/29/2019 Hilarious..the ending as well was a nice touch |
| Padfootette chapter 5 . 12/21/2019 Loved it |
| myriadofrainbows chapter 5 . 12/20/2019 Another amazing chapter, I couldn’t stop smiling throughout. I know that this is supposed to be an AU of crawlersout but I just can’t help but wish that this just takes place ahead of where the current story timeline is. Leon is the adorable sweet but incredibly smart child with a stubborn streak you would expect from a combination of Harry and Gellert, and his relationship and dynamic with Tom is just so precious. Can’t wait for the next update from you(doesn’t matter which fic it is)! |
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 5 . 12/20/2019 I like it! |
| Tommy14 chapter 5 . 12/20/2019 I have enjoyed every minuet reading this story I really hate to see it end. I wish there would be more to this tale. Thank you for sharing this. |
| Rori Potter chapter 5 . 12/20/2019 Wow. Update soon. |
| Willofhounds chapter 5 . 12/20/2019 This fic is hilarious. I love it! Update soon |
| Kurohime96 chapter 1 . 11/20/2019 I don't care where you write it I just want to read grinderwald and Tom reaction to harry being the master of death I know their not gonna be surprised because they're smart I just want the three of them to talk about it or something |
| Sighned-Anonymous chapter 4 . 10/19/2019 So quick question. Why does Leon call Harry Harry instead of mum? I kept thinking about it and I couldn’t figure it out. Love this AU |
| BlessedHope chapter 4 . 9/4/2019 this is very unique! I love itthank you for writing this |
| HPLover chapter 3 . 4/19/2019 Love this story. I know it’s a super spin off from crawlersout, but I love the idea of femHarryxGrindelwald 3 |
| bookaholic123 chapter 4 . 3/2/2019 Awesome chapter as usual! It was great to see some Tom and Leon bonding, you did a fabulous job of keeping him in character. Just one question though, is there any particular reason Leon calls his parents Harry and Gellert instead of Mom and Mad or some variation of that? I mean Gellert I get to extent considering there are safety issues plus the man's own personality to take into account but I don't see Harry going for it. Clarification would be appreciated, but regardless great job as always, I'm a huge fan of all your fics! |
| AiramS chapter 4 . 3/1/2019 Impressive how you made Tom into a doting older brother and yet succeeded in keeping him in character (from how he is in crawlersout) :) This was such a sweet, little thing to read |
| CerealReader chapter 4 . 3/1/2019 I like this story but I really really hope you write more of crawlersout soon! |
