Good chapter. Waiting another...

i need more of this

I NEED IT!

i love the dynamic, it fits better then anything else

Nice story hope it gets continued at some point.

I've greatly enjoyed the story, though it saddens me to see that it appears to be abandoned.

I hope you'll keep going until you finish it.

Shame. Still, maybe at some point you'll find your inspiration for writing this again and we'll get more chapters. I'll be waiting for it if you do :)

I'm kind of dreading the next chapter. I knew this was going to be a short one when I saw it was left abandoned, but I'd been hoping to see the scene where they saw something about what the other was hiding and everything went tense and hilarious like in Mr and Mrs Smith. Hopefully there's SOMETHING to that effect in the last chapter.

super

Definitely miss this one, hope you come back to it someday. :)

Thanks for writing!

Update this please, it's a great story. One of my favourite story's on this site

Of all the abandoned stories sitting in my ‘Follows’ this is the one I hope gets revived the most.

no why stop this is so good please come back PLS!

I was right. I shouldn't have moved onto this chapter when the story appears to be abandoned. Neeeeeeeeeed mooooooore! Please?

You wanted to know our thoughts? My only thought is that it's a terrible shame that this story hasn't been updated for over a year. My only complaint is the overly detailed parts that pop up here and there, like Harry's prep for the hit. That could have been half as wordy and just as effective. It was still good tho, don't get me wrong. The lemon was amazing too! If such scenes had a rating system, this one would easily be in the top two percent. I'm afraid to move on to chapter six because you stopped updating and this seems like a more natural stopping point if the story is going to stay short, even those I want much more.

Knives are somewhat frequently double edged but rarely double bladed. At least in the parlance I use.

My Fairbairn-Sykes knife was black, since a lot of the intended work was for the night time. It was authentic, according to a retired US Marine Raider, circa WWII. He wasn't especially impressed.

Lost in a move. No idea what happened to it.

Fun read.

Tell me why the first time I read the title I read it as Me