I enjoyed your story. It's nice to read about Tank and him finding love. Great mystery to read about too.

Okay, finished your story. Was a little disappointed in the last part of the story, you seemed to lose the energy, especially in the last few chapters. It felt like you were so ready to finish the story that you tossed out the story line, and replaced it with a very shortened version, and said "There, that should do it ..." but it didn't. The tempo changed so drastically it was shouting "I want to be done, so here is an abbrevater verison, and that's all folks!" Your "fades into black love scenes," were a bit of downers. Believe me when I say many writers seem to write only for the sexual thrill of putting it on paper and bore me, I do enjoy some hints there, in fact, a scene doesn't have to be explicit. Just make me believe the writer is not a prude.
Thank you for the first 1/2 to 2/3 of the story.

Great ending. I don’t usually read the usual Evil Joe/Helen stories. But I really enjoyed this one.

I hope things work out for these two.

Nice plotting.

I meant Annie must think Trenton is Arkum Asylum with all the goings on.

I can’t imagine what Annie must be thinking.

I was going to say it could be Hottie Hotel. For the guys working there. Not the guests!

Nice little mystery.

You have to like a sensible woman.

Aww. I hope we get to read about Annie meeting the Manosos.

Couldn't have happened to a nicer guy. I don't know how I missed this story the first time around. Glad I read it now, although I am looking forward to the prequel being written right now.

I love the phrase “ ...Helen’s berserker rage...”

I should be going to bed!

Sweet. Happy for Tank. I’m hoping she’ll stick around.