Oh my gosh I love this so much story telling was great and it was easy to keep up with I do have a few suggestions I would love to see more of Gus and lassie I also found it a little weird that lassie was Maggie’s godfather not Gus but that’s just my opinion, I think it would be cute if you did something with iris but still a great story

Good for you! Acting is cool, to bad I'm not good at it. But wow this is a good story! Keep going! It's awesome! It's time to be awesome! Go big be you so awesome! It's time to be awesome! Let loose be true so awesome! ~ Swirlspot

I adore the part when Juliet says Maggie and her boyfriend look at each other the same way Juliet looks at Shawn. I loved it! Great work!