Reviews for Incandescent
L0NER18 chapter 12 . 7/15
This was a good read. Shame it seems to be abandoned. This is my first Fem!Jon fic. I really enjoyed the building up of the North preparing for war. Smart characters doing smart things is often rare, if a character is to smart it seems like they have future knowledge, but I felt like you were right on the cusp of what is believable.
Ink-n-blood chapter 1 . 7/15
This story is amazing, your writing is beautiful
Tate horan chapter 12 . 7/3
Update please
akire26 chapter 1 . 6/17
There is no better GoT story better than this one, hands down!
Lady Syndra chapter 12 . 6/13
Hm... I don't think could forgive Catelyn even now. The only reason she got over her hatred for her husband's bastard is because... she is no longer his bastard. That's literally it. She would never have attempted to get to know the child otherwise. Never bothered to try to like the child.
DawnScarlet19610 chapter 4 . 5/30
Great story so far, really enjoying it. I did notice that you changed the colour of Lyarra's eyes from grey to purple though. I prefer purple. I love that you use purple, but I recommend making a quick correction in the first chapter about the grey eyes.
avengingweeb chapter 12 . 4/10
Just realised that it hasn't been updated in aaaaages, such a good story, will you ever come back to it?
lovenightshade03 chapter 12 . 1/25
Oh my God, how disgusted must Lyarra have been at finding herself at the receiving end of Robert's lust... I bet Robb is going to hate his namesake quite a lot jejeje
This story is incredible, thank you! Can't wait to see what happens next ;)
MoonlightMiracle.SakurianaHime chapter 12 . 1/2
Please continue this story and update soon!
Guest chapter 7 . 12/26/2019
Lovely work... small comment on grammar? I think... anyway, the word ’militarial’, about half way through, should be martial, just so you know!
alexandrathorn chapter 12 . 12/25/2019
this is literally art. one of if not the best got fic ive ever read. im sad to see it hasnt been updated in two years, but i hope you continue writing in general if not thiswish you the best and merry christmas x
RowdyRob chapter 3 . 12/25/2019
Chapter 2) Ok I calmed down and read more and Caityn realized thet the babe she wanted to kill is Lyanna'
RowdyRob chapter 2 . 12/24/2019
Caitlyn evil stupid Tully bitch
Hell of Sounds chapter 12 . 12/18/2019
Please update this. It is so good.
ashenerden chapter 7 . 12/10/2019
Oh my God probably best Edmure in fanfiction.
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