Hmm... I dunno about this one. You've written William well and made him and interesting character but... this kind of incestual molesting is really... weird. We already know he went a bit insane and killed kids after Shawn and Cindy died, especially since he killed Caleb too, but he took Alex BEFORE all that happened, and the reasoning was just because he was Will's 'type'. William's a creepy character but I think you're kinda milking it a bit; it's a bit much. Even back with the girl who became Chica is a bit much. Considering the character of William as Purple Guy, I reckon the killing is enough; we already know he's a messed up character. I get you're going with the whole 'destroying the Afton family' and William not being able to take care of his own kids but this is kinda taking it too far in my opinion. At least from Alex's standpoint. If these feelings came up after the whole Shawn and Cindy being killed thing, sure whatever. Alex was taken in for that reason though, because he was William's type, BEFORE everything went wrong. Considering William was meant to be a good bloke beforehand, it really doesn't connect well and fit together that he's so wrong in the head before he just went insane.

Still, Purple Guy's a character who kills. That's messed up in itself and I think that's all the character needs. At this point you're just doing whatever you can to make the character seem unredeemable, which I'm not sure is the right reason to go with this in my opinion.

This type of thing is kinda unneeded to be honest, and also not appropriate for a T-rated fic. You go really in-depth with the topic, especially in this story and in this chapter. It's not T-rated content; the fic should be M by this point. It's kinda a bit of a yucky topic, and while the little hints back in Books 1 and 2 were alright, up to here, it should be M.

In all honesty, this whole fic seems odd to me. It doesn't fit with the other two books imo. The whole Sister Location thing seems a bit out of place to me. I know it's kinda a given because of William's daughter being Baby, but the execution was a bit weird. The characterisation of the animatronics and the relationship between them and Alex/Eggs felt odd to me, and you also kinda threw us straight into the middle of it. There wasn't a lot of setting the scene and getting us into the scene nicely. Compared to the other two books, this one's just had a very different flow and feel to it and it feels odd to me, especially around how the whole Sister Location sections play out, and I'm not sure I like it as much.

I'm gonna keep reading to see how it goes and coz I know there's a fourth book too, but yeah I'm just not liking this third book as much as the other two in all honesty.

Nice! I looked through the chapter titles, did you use lyrics from songs? I'll name the ones I recognize:

Chapter One: Circus of the Dead
Four: Daddy's Little Monsters
Ten/Eleven: I Can't Fix You
Fifteen: Nightmare

I finally finished reading this part... And it was Bizarre... The ending... The last few chapters was Unexpected...
Thank God for making non of Good Protagonists Die...
But also... OMFG
And Also didn't expect Alex was the Michael Afton. In a way I'm glad Mike was Not the Michael Afton here...

I still want William Afton to begone from this Universe for Good! No matter Eggs forgive him... His sins is too Much and he made lots of people and kids suffer and please just Gone for Good already...

But it was still Amazing fic!

Why'd Jessica get promoted? She's horrible!

Awesome story seems william had one to many children that a lot of ppl forgotten about alex Shawn calab Elizabeth and micheal

So will the sister be in baby

Damn, you're a writing genius. Eggs being Sammy all the time is just brilliant! I wonder what happened to Charlie

Sister location songs as chapter headings? Clever.

Man this story was good! Are ya gonna upload more to it or is it finished?

Wow poor Eggs :(

Poor Eggs I feel bad for him

Aw poor Eggs :(

Beautiful!

I love Eggs and the fact that he has purple eyes too I love it!

I love the start of this story, you have me hooked on your story!

...Not how i expect things to end, but then again it somehow went back into game theory/history/plot/whatever the heck it is. "Michael Afton killed his father in the end" is what FNAF people worked out, so i guess that's what was hinted somewhere in the future. I do find it questionable that you brought them back the way you did... but eh, whatever. It worked out... somehow.

So basically Freddy Fazbear and all its relatives continues on without the mysteries death and murders. The haunting continues of course, but things are looking up oddly enough. On another note, i'll say that you have the whole "William Afton is a functional psychopath" down to an art... it's creepy and i really do want to see him dead (again and remain dead). Can't have it all of course.

Good job on the entire trilogy. There is in fact a FNAF 6 that is supposedly the final game Scott will ever make of that series. Whether that means you'll pump out another sequel though... i'll check back in the future haha.