I loved this story. Somehow very unique in its own way. Well done, the Sequel is already loaded for me to read. (I can't read on this site and download everything to Word)

wow i love this i can’t wait to read the sequel!

that last part.

I've come back to read this story like 7 times over the past 2 years. I love the characterizations and how you perfectly modify the story to fit your ideas. I also love the pet-name "darlin" so it's a win-win. Thank you for your art!

Great story!

Beautiful story. I truly enjoyed it.

This is an amazing story and I love it more every time I read it. I love how gentlemanly Jasper is, how he quietly adores Harry. How he takes Ron and Hermione’s abandonment as the offense it is but puts up with them for Harry

I love this so much! Man, I now have a crush on Jasper and your stories are to blame

Stunning

I loved this!

I'm so pumped to read the sequel! The characters were well written, and though the plot was familiar it was different enough and we'll written enough to keep me thoroughly entertained. Fantastic job!

wow taht last line was just so sad and yet so perfect. i can only hope she wont be a vampire due to being the mistress of death? idk. i mean i just cant wait to see what the sequel will reveal. fyi if u havent guessed yet i loved this story.

V. interesting little story; so much so that I'm actually going to 'Favourite' it. :-)

This story was actually a surprise. You utilized Jasper very well.

I was hoping that Harry is the Master of Death and they would discover that she's not aging and thus cannot die. Or maybe she can die but comes back. Or maybe she can die but each time she is hurt enough Jasper would have to change her again. Did his blood heal her at least? Or just leave her in the mangled, dying state?
I am so glad that Harry had Jasper by her side. This is a very well done fem!Harry.
I like that the timeline was sped up and they accomplished some things sooner and avoided other issues.
Thank you for writing.