Reviews for What if?
Songorita chapter 20 . 7/22
I love this story it is one of my favorites I cant wait to read more. I hope Hattie only has Jasper as a mate. Please update soon.
Songorita chapter 10 . 7/22
I love this story I hope she only has Jasper as a mate.
tabala chapter 20 . 4/21
This is such a great fic. I am very much in love with it, and I would love to see it continue.
DawnScarlet19610 chapter 2 . 3/17
Have you ever spoken with a 7 year old? I doubt it. They most certainly don't replace their "r"s with "w"s. You have Harriet speaking like a 4 year old. Also, this would have been a lot better if the Dursleys were forced to take Harriet out with them for a day, and they were persuaded by Heidi to go on a tour of Volterra's underground castle. In a high stress situation like that, Harriet's magic would come to her aid, which would catch the attention of the vampires. Aro would be fascinated, and choose to keep her alive. The portrayal of Jane and Alec are very poorly done. Alec would never tell a child she speaks adorably, why the hell would he even care enough to say that. And for them to play hero? That would never happen. I also deeply dislike your overdone abuse from Vernon. Yes, he's a horrible man, but you take it too far with no reasonable explanation for such a change in behaviour from canon. There's a lot of potential, but so many hang ups. The stupid way you made Harriet speak only gets to me the most. It's so annoying when people get things like that so utterly wrong.
00Dark-Pheonix00 chapter 20 . 3/16
I absolutely loved reading this!. I was able to get through it in one sitting. I would totally love if you updated this I am looking forward to the next installment!
cicibunbuns chapter 15 . 1/14
And at that moment Jasper felt a chill run down his spine! lol
PrincessMagic chapter 8 . 12/18/2019
Ha! Love Sirius!
SakuraKoi chapter 20 . 12/14/2019
so good I want more
Catmunkijs chapter 20 . 10/3/2019
Cool. Please four more update.
Guest chapter 20 . 8/24/2019
I LOVVVVVVE LOVVVVVE IT
KEEP WRITING PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
Lill E D chapter 20 . 7/29/2019
Love it. Please update soon
Kurosaki Yukia chapter 20 . 6/3/2019
My gosh! This story is ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! I love how you also make the newspaper articles! They're great! You're really meant to be a writer! I can't even write an essay right. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR MAKING THIS! I can't wait for the new chapters that are to come and see the changes in the bug family's routine Hattie enters school. Also, can't wait to know which school is chosen. Once again, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR MAKING SUCH A WONDERFUL STORY! I TRULY LOVE IT!
Kurosaki Yukia chapter 15 . 5/31/2019
oh Remus and Sirius, they're just the best!
Kurosaki Yukia chapter 14 . 5/31/2019
Hahhahahahaha the last part just cracks me up. Poor Marcus!
Kurosaki Yukia chapter 7 . 5/30/2019
Hahahhahahahaha this is a VERY amusing chapter it totally made my day by just reading it!
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