Hi! I was really looking forward to Tony and JJ meeting their child! As well as to the Team Dinner, the Meetings, and what DiNozzo decided to do after his 3 month leave. I hope you add a few chapters to this!

What a load of wank. If you've ever watched NCIS, it sure as hell doesn't show. Tony was the biggest twat on the show and I was glad when he left.

My 3rd or 4th time reading this and it's still just as good as it was the 1st go round! I love this pairing and seeing Tony portrayed in a different light is fun.

Thank you for a great story!

I can't believe it's been nearly five years since this fic was started and it's still just as good a read now as it was then. I will admit to being a little bit disappointed that there isn't another chapter or three (the meeting with the president, the birth, and the media fallout especially with his name leaked) but I'm still just glad I found it to read it again in the first place.
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did anyone take this over at all

this was a great fic i love the fact that Tony fooled the BAU. thanks for writing

reading again because I cant help myself. I love this and undercover marine so much. wish you would do some more for them. I'd write myself but lack the creative skills

Maybe do a future au where the rest of the team stays together minus Tony of course. And they have another case with the FBI and they meet JJ.

is there a continuation of this story if so can you tell the name of it and the author of it so i can go and read it

Wow. First off I should point out that this story is amazing.

But it wasn't until this chapter that I considered things from Abby's point of view. She's like a catfish victim. The person she loved never existed. She'll grieve for Very Special Agent Dinozzo, even if he never existed. I feel so sorry for her.

you have a habit of writing disappointing endings, heh.

...only law enforcement officer on board? you realize that there's such a thing as Military Police, right?

and now you changed Pike's rank from General to Admiral. two different branches of the military, dude.

okay, this has been bugging me for awhile in this story. Marines are NOT a part of the Navy. the USMC is an entirely separate branch of the military that happens to have a close relationship with the US Navy. my grandfather was a marine. took early retirement as a Staff Sgt. after 17 years, including three tours in Korea and Vietnam.

...Ziva is a trained assassin. if she were as unobservant as you're implying here, she'd be dead.