Reviews for Grey In The Stars
lil-sis4556 chapter 11 . 7/3
Almost all of your italicized phrases are cut in half.
Zaidee Lighthart chapter 22 . 6/3
Dang, last chapter... I was really enjoying this story too. I can only hope there is more in the future. Thanks for sharing.
stars90 chapter 22 . 5/25
Love this! It's amazing work!
KnowInsight chapter 22 . 5/6
Great HP/SG1 crossover. I really like the Harry/Teal'c menotorship or perhaps something more. Also, parsletongue against Gould... Awesome! The fascination is a bit weird though.
Lordlexx chapter 21 . 3/26
What type of gay ass relationship are you building here? If this shit is gonna be slash you should warn people. Not everyone wants to read that and noone wants to waste their time with all the chapters just to find out that a story has a genre that they don't read.
Lordlexx chapter 18 . 3/26
I wish you would have Harry spending some time with a girl dammit...
Millie072 chapter 1 . 2/23
Intriguing! and highly different. The three way meeting is a great idea.
Guest chapter 22 . 9/30/2019
Please continue!
RWIW chapter 1 . 8/25/2019
Your disclaimer is obnoxious... but, on the other hand, I get your point because I’ve read enough stories that have disclaimers outright along the lines of ‘INCIDENTAL SLASH, BUT NOT A BIG PART OF THE STORY’ or ‘no slash anywhere ever’ or ‘het and femmeslash [implicitly as part of the centra (...) harem]’ or ‘canon gay character [married off to a woman posthaste in-fic because REALPOLITIK!]’ or... Yeah, I do know why you might feel like parodying them. And then there’s always the reviews that complain even about an incidental mention of Side Character #20082 being gay with ‘don’t force the homosexual agenda on this work! it was such a good story up until now!’

So... I’d really like to chew you out for the disclaimer, but I can’t pretend you aren’t parodying a frequent phenomenon in fandom. Bah humbug.
Guest chapter 22 . 5/8/2019
So we've seen bits and pieces of the Dark faction of what the Wizarding World is up to but what about the other factions? As a non-present Grey Lord does Harry even have his own faction? Like people who claim neutrality? Are most magical creatures/beings on his side?

What about Luna (her adorable Seer self), Neville, the Twins, Remus, Bill, Poor Dobby, And Charlie... No need to ask about the jealous prat or the know it all.

I wonder if Luna would be so kind as to send Harry some (1 or 2) Secrecy Contracts? Along with some other useful magical supplies, after all her Grey Lord has been neglecting that part of himself recently. Maybe have Daniel tell Teal'c of the Witch Trials from the Mundane p.o.v. and then tell the other side?

I wonder if Harry has a rich Ancient Heritage? Like would Make and the other Mundanes with the Gene be considered Squibs?

Are the Goblins still taking care of Harry's money (or even just part of it) even if it is mostly Mundane? I can't see the Goblins letting one of their oldest (and used to be richest) clients go completely just bc he wants to mingle. Maybe they have magical (Squib, Weres, Muggleborns, ect.) employees working at some type of Mundane Branch of Gringotts? Or every year they transfer 1-10% of Harry's Mundane funds back to his Gringotts account to reinvest in the magical community? Harry knows after all that Goblins are the best at Banking and having a back up plan for his back up plan is always a smart idea.
Guest chapter 16 . 4/20/2019
What happens with the Russians? Didn't they ask about the explosion and learn about the Stargate?
Thristan chapter 3 . 3/8/2019
"He'll do" Talk about high praise, considering we're dealing with Jack
Pointer3109 chapter 4 . 2/15/2019
How to put this...

The Air Force Academy is a college Which trains students to be officers in a US service, primarily the Air Force.

Graduates from the military service academies such as the USAFA are trained and don't have to go through basic. They are also commissioned as Second Lieutenants.

As new officers, they would need to attend special training for the role they are assigned according to their specialty. The type of position they fill will change as they grow older and more experienced.

Officers are also expected to continue their formal education with most senior officers such as Colonels and Generals having doctorates.
Pointer3109 chapter 3 . 2/15/2019
Born to be a pilot. Of course he gets stuck in ground warfare.
Kelvrin chapter 22 . 1/28/2019
Awesome story! More please! :)
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