Reviews for Long Live The Queen
mojones2119 chapter 43 . 7/24
Lol glad I finished this Wonderful Fic! Thank you for your hard work. Cheers!
mojones2119 chapter 30 . 7/23
Hate that I’m stopping here but I do so hate THAT FAMILY. Sorry!
mojones2119 chapter 9 . 7/22
LOL now Hermione is the Idiot. Shut up, girl! She can’t, can she?
mojones2119 chapter 8 . 7/22
Not sure if I’ve ever reviewed before, but I can’t stand those nasty Weasles (mostly MollyGin Gin). Other than those two being included, I love this fic!
SandshrewTea chapter 23 . 7/15
Fascinating story.
Tresss chapter 43 . 7/13
Appreciated the angle the story took ,but more importantly the language and the presentation of characters was fun and in depth in the way they were created . Loved it
clara200 chapter 43 . 7/12
Great story liked how Dumbledore was shown the errors of his ways and the wizard world changed for the better.
lschierer chapter 44 . 6/25
I enjoyed this story a great deal. The one thing I find curious is the decision to drop the horcruxes entirely. I actually rather like what you did with the diary, I think it really clever, and it would have been really interesting to see what you would have done with the locket.

The diary, the locket and the snake are the only horcruxes in cannon that we see actually acting like parts of Riddle in some way. You accounted for the diary and the snake, but the locket has a huge influence on both Harry and Ron in book 7, and I suspect it is actually behind the state that Grimmauld is in, the gloom, the pervasive dirt that fights back, the degree of infestation. It deserved to be handled in this.

Harry's connection to Riddle in cannon for all it is disturbing, doesn't act like a horcrux at all, so dropping it as one doesn't bother me at all the same way. I could see the Ring being cursed essentially as a trap, and the cup being something else entirely, and the diadem being an anchor for the curse on the DADA position without it being a horcrux. It would be in line with your story to have Riddle have enacted 6 or 7 totally different anchors instead of cannon's multiple horcrux. In a real way, it would highlight that Dumbledore got it wrong even more than what you did!

Anyway, it's just a thought, if you ever were to go back to this, it seems like something fixable. I really did enjoy this, or I wouldn't bother with what I hope you take constructively.
Shadowclones chapter 31 . 6/23
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dovescom chapter 30 . 6/19
McGonagall would curtsy, not bow. A man bows, women curtsy.
dovescom chapter 29 . 6/19
Solders do NOT bow to the Queen, they salute
Guest chapter 42 . 6/11
Absolutely beautiful story, including the epilogue/vignettes. Outstanding!
Guest chapter 38 . 6/11
Thanks for resolving the Draco situation so well. I'd actually worried about the little Bantam rooster.
Guest chapter 37 . 6/11
Bless your heart for Snape's happily ever after.
Guest chapter 36 . 6/11
I was hoping Liz was a squib when she picked up the wand in an earlier chapter. Ha
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