Reviews for Gryffindor's Girl |
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megaman34235 chapter 1 . 6/7 One of the best HP fics i've ever read, hope you continue it one day. |
CatScratcher chapter 29 . 5/27 This is really good |
SeaInkBlot chapter 29 . 5/21 I AM SHOOK! *SCREAMS* you're amazing as always, thanks for this wonderful chapter! |
Glumski chapter 29 . 4/28 What a fantastic story! This kept me on the edge of my seat and made me quite happy for a few days as few stories do. I hope you'll come back to continue this in the not-too-far future; I'd love to read about what comes next! |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/10 The ending is amazing. I just had to say good job. |
Guest chapter 29 . 3/25 Amazing. You are doing great things with this story tbh. Simply amazing, I cannot wait for the next update. Thank you very much for taking the time to gift us this story! |
elanga.blake chapter 1 . 2/5 i love the owl thing you did at the bottom of the story could you send it to me so i could keep it as a pic please every time i try to make one of my own i muck it up and give up because i spend forever trying to figure it out and want to destroy my computer. |
Avalonemyst chapter 1 . 1/22 An amazing start. Thank you! |
Isabelnecessaryonabicycle chapter 29 . 1/4 Wow, this is an amazing story I can't wait to read what happens next. All sorts of theories about Voldemort, will he no longer have magic? will he be a werewolf? is he being slowly poisoned with the snake venom? |
xxxLeanniexxx chapter 29 . 9/12/2019 She's Back but that is only the start! |
greypinkblack chapter 29 . 8/13/2019 This is an amazing story - glad I followed §on of §napes recommendation ;) Please please udate soon Starwolfe! |
ThePirateQueen367 chapter 29 . 7/30/2019 Waot so they're all alive just injured, Viktor, Fleur, and Mary. |
Lerris chapter 1 . 7/14/2019 After her wearwolf bite, the cuff was used as an excuse to where she didn't get the full curse, but I was curious if you ever freed her from that thing, and so far, you didn't, so I guess by the end of chapter 12 she has been mangled multiple times, had her magic disconnected from one arm, and been in many ways permanently scarred and perhaps partially crippled for life, while knowing that she is going to have to die, and her apparently only chance to use the knowledge is to change things in small enough ways that fate fighting back doesn't kill her. The writing isn't the problem and I certainly don't mind seeing an AU, but really, must it be so dark, particularly to the main character? Also change follows change, period. You're fate fighting back where she changes something yet everything possible that could happen to her still does, usually in worse ways, just in some ways seems like lower quality writing, where your allowing fate to check her schedule and dump the original bad things on Harry periodically to keep the tension up. Basically if you change stuff, then things should really change. Pettigrew getting thrown in Azkaban should probably change when Voldemort is resurrected a bit not have the universe shift until things are back on track, which is presumably what happens here. |
Lerris chapter 12 . 7/14/2019 I read this on AO3 before finding a copy here, where it was easier to review. At any rate, I'm not sure how much more of this I'm going to read with the way your semi torturing your main character. |
Phexy chapter 29 . 6/30/2019 Great chapter! To my mind you created a well dosed atmosphere of tension, urgency and unknowingness to suffer along with the characters. Well done! |