This is my second reading of your wonderful story. The only comment I made the first time was (It was wonderful. Enough said." What was wrong with me. This piece of work was excellent. I've read a lot of fan fiction, but this story was unbelievable. Not anyone can write the way you do. If whatever I'm reading gives me a good feelings I think that's all I can ask of a writer and you have fulfilled that for me. Thank you so much.

I just re-read this masterpiece of yours and wanted to tell you how great it is. It’s funny, sad, and romantic and one of my all-time favorites.

Hope you are well!

Im out a robot that will do whatever kensi tells him to do thats so pathetic

It was wonderful. Enough said.

Wow! I don't know how I missed this story but I just finishe reading it. You have to write in this universe again. This story was awesome.

You

I absolutely loved this story...i hope you do another one in this AU.

This reads like a good sci-fi, slash crime thriller story...love that Deeks and Kensi are beginning to actually bond...finally...and that elements of their show persona's are coming through your writing...although the premise is quite different than the show.

I'm so intrigued with this story...puts two of my favorite genres together...scifi and crime drama...

OMG! Poor Kensi...You've got the characters spot on, even if Deeks is a robot in this story...Loved Sam asking her if she was sleeping with Deeks...and also her almost drooling over all his guns...

As always, you write and make us believe whatever it is you are writing, I am loving this story.

I am so loving this...Deeks as a robot?

Enjoyable

Okay, so literally the entire time I was reading your story, (which was amazing, btw), all I could think was... What if there was a chapter where Kensi was shot, and then she woke up and asked Deeks how she could have survived that. But then Deeks told her that, technically, her human form hadn't survived. Then she'd be like wtf and Deeks would be like, "Well, you're like me now." And then Deeks would explain the whole experiment on turning humans into Companions, and how she was the first real test subject. Then hey would spend the rest of the story getting her accustomed to the new change, fighting the rebels together, (who would now be after her as well), and, well, falling in love. Seriously that was all I could think about every single sentence I read because OHMYGODHDHH how cool would that be.

Okay... Now that my spastic mayhem session is done, I want to say that this was an amazing story and incredibly creative. It was a really fun way to spend my New Years Eve. :)

Brilliant story well done just read it from start to finish looking forward to reading the next...

Dead. I am dead. The awesomeness of this fic killed me.