And for as much was wrong with the story, you prove yourself even more pathetic by not finishing what you start. You are a shit writer who should stop. You are horrible at plot generation, and your characters reflect you, pathetic and stupid.

Moron for following canon. Another pathetic loser who can’t write his own plot. Loser.

It’s Zoe’s choice. You are a fucking idiot. Go die in a fire. Stupid people are infesting this planet.

Wait What the fuck this reeks of incest

only percy and artemis

This is weird. They are triplets. Full-blooded triplets. Just no.

But this one is so much better so far than your other one and I've read your other stories are so good to can you at least consider updating this story a little more to finish it please.

-Raychel child of Hades

wtf

Don’t worry about it! If you don’t want to write this story anymore, Can you at least allow us to “adopt” this story or use it as a base for another stories( giving the credits to you of being the one who wrote it in the first place of course!)

Rewrite this story please

If you could rewrite the story, I would be okay with that. There are far too little stories for PJO now that the series is practically at an end. It’s hard to find a good one

Don't debate. This could definitely use a rewrite.

I am sad to see you go

I hope you do a rewrite it really good

I would love a rewrite