Woah this was filled with plot twists and I had no idea what was happening next!
At first they seem happy and then it seems Izaya tricked everyone but then no it's Shizuo!
I loved it!

I just adore this story to bits, re-reading it again always manage to make me grin. I love how everyone involved has their own agenda and how each chapter provides brilliant twists, and not everything is as it seems. It's just so beautiful and this story is beautiful thank you for writing this. You portray Izaya and Shizuo's dynamics, how the other seem to have the upper hand only for an otherwise fact to be revealed the next chapter. It's just brilliant and beautiful and I love this. Love LOVE this!

This is no doubt one of my favorite stories. I just love memory loss romance stories, losing who you are and who you used to be but the feelings you have for the other stay with you. It's such a romantic concept, I love it so much.

Trigger warnings for rape would be very much appreciated here. Just saying.

Short but loveable
This story is really good
The protozoan is not that protozoan~ love it
I like the way you end the story but now I kinda fell in love with your story, I want to read more
Maybe you can make a sequel or something? Please..?

What?! This is really the end?! WTF I loved it! Make a sequel or something! I don't know! LOVED IT!

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That was amazing, I didn't predicted any of that sort of events!, you are an amazing writer! I'm falling in love with that Shizuo, you always make Shizuo more smart than the average Shizaya writers,...amazing,... because I don't think Shizuo is dumb, he may be silly in some stuff but he's so sharp I can see him do that all that things, except for he's a good man, he has the mind and the prize, named ''Orihara Izaya'', and there! we have the mastermind Shizuo! But the most amazing thing about this fic is the romantic and lovely he can be. He really likes the flea and the other way around. Soo cute... anyway, I hope I can read your other updates, because I'm really a fan of you.
-Lumsk

Please, please, PLEASE say there is a sequel. I need closure on that amazing, plot twisting story. A sequel would be the best.

Gyaah this was awesome as hell! The new format was quite good too.
You really did the good choice with splitting the story into three parts, even if I couldn't predict the twists again x3 Either Izaya's monologue part in italics still fascinates me as much than before. I feel like... at home while reading it xD (weiiird I know).
Well, this short story is one of my favourites. I can't perfectly explain why though.
Good continuation and have a nice day !

Good story, also I would like to think Shizuo would figure things out. Over the years of hating and trying to kill Izaya I would like to think Shizuo knows him pretty well or rather he has strong instincts towards Izaya and his thought process or motives.

I read the last chapter more thoroughly and now see where I made the mistake of thinking Izaya was faking amnesia. I thought he wouldn't leave things to chance and have Shinra give them a fake drug then Izaya would act like he had no memories. Not that Izaya would let the real drug be administered and there be a counter drug as stated in this chapter.

Oh well I enjoyed the story, thanks for posting it!

Yeah... somehow, I'm even MORE worried now...

I really enjoyed your story thank you for sharing

This is pure genius!
Too bad this story won't last long...

Wow, this one twist after another. I love it! 3