This was just as great as the White Rose one! It's going to my Favorites!

awww. i loved this! again, i used to hate AUs but more and more im finding I love them so so much. This was awesome, amazing, artistically accomplished. well done

Interesting

It was a really good story with an au I've honestly not seen before you dun good ( this is just me being really nitpicky don't take it to heart ) there are quite a few grammar errors

Thanks for writing. Whil6w I felt that you kinda rushed along a few times, and sometimes conversations would be confusingly worded, it was non the less an entertaining read!

Seeing as you completed it today, now is a good time to pick it up. Chapter 1 was good ans I'll keep reading!

So adorable

REALLY GOOD. It's arguably one of the top 10 stories I've read on this site and that a long list. Could have used a few make out scenes, but I'm not complaining.

Good to see that while I was out of the game, you didn't dissapoint me gal! And it isn't a cold, it's more like a nasty infection around my aerial stuff, hahaha

amazing story, looking forward to chapter 16

Awesome chapter! Cant wait for yang to come save blake! Can't wait for the next update!

Nice twist at the end keep up the good work can't wait for the next chapter

Very intriguing start! I like :D

Just one problem: Blake is supposed to be at least a halfway decent fighter according to this very fanfic. She keeps sucking ass in every single confrontation.

gah, suspense! awesome chapter, this was a nice, unexpected plot twist. I've seen theories that Cinder is Blake's mother, but I've never believed it. works well for this story though.
anxiously/ excitedly waiting for chapter 14!