| Reviews for HP n GoT Story Being Rewritten |
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  goblin chapter 4 . 2/24 more chapters please |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/9 How funny would it be if he lost his immortality on Earth just to accidentally gain it again on Planetos? Say maybe when/if he kills the Undying Warlocks he absorbs what is left of their current life force and what they had stolen from others? Or he 'fall's into a ritual circle that the Red Priests were doing to gain power and gets a longer life span? |
 kirosyamcha chapter 4 . 11/17/2019 You stopped at a cliffhanger that’s right evil lol |
| Dreous44 chapter 4 . 10/12/2019 Great story don’t abandon! |
| orionastro chapter 4 . 7/2/2019 amazing story so far, i really hope you can update soon, lets see the impact that Harry will have on westeros , can hardly wait for the next chapters . |
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/14/2019 fucking shit |
| Halo Star Wars X-over fan chapter 4 . 2/27/2019 I’m somewhat saddened by how long it’s been since this story has last been updated as the idea behind Harry’s abilities are great and something I’ve wanted but haven’t found until now. Although I’m also deeply disappointed given that Harry could of easily saved Lyanna, the only result that would end with her death would be if she was poisoned with something greater then what Harry can cure (which no such poison exists) or she could of realistically died if she was wounded mortality, however by that I mean having her legs, arms or other parts of her completely chopped off as otherwise the Phoenix tears will completely heal or cure her. Because after all even if you were stabbed repeatedly or had your own intestines leaking out of your body the Tears will heal you back to near full health, such is the power of them. So I’m quite disappointed that you seem to be so reluctant to change canon which is the whole point of FanFiction, when she shouldn’t of died, and it only happened because you made it so. Either way though I hope this isn’t permanently abandoned as the plot behind the story is pretty unique and good. |
| stylo1 chapter 4 . 10/15/2018 just like that he created indoor plumbing? i our world such thing became common around 1960 and westeros is like our world was in 500 or something like that. thsts just impossible. story was not bad but somethings are def out of the realm of posiblities |
| stylo1 chapter 2 . 10/15/2018 an average size boar can easily feed 100 men for a day, so no need to catch one every time. just sayin |
| Hallowtide chapter 4 . 10/2/2018 This story is fantastic! I hope it’s continued one day ! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/23/2018 Nice |
| anarion87 chapter 4 . 6/14/2018 nice so far |
| ironhair chapter 4 . 5/18/2018 Looking to read more! |
| Uzushiogakure chapter 4 . 5/18/2018 Sirius |
| ironhair chapter 1 . 5/17/2018 Reading |
