Reviews for Desert Wolves
rikoonee chapter 31 . 4h
All the love for this story. I really enjoy seeing Ashara Dayne and her desert wolves. Looking forward to it if there's more. 3
L0NER18 chapter 5 . 7/25
I was hoping for a double take from Jamie. Maybe a small section from his perspective. But alas it was not to be. Maybe in a later chapter. So far I'm enjoying this read. I have skipped this fic several times before and I'm kinda upset I did.
L0NER18 chapter 1 . 7/25
Kinda sad Arthur had to die. I have only read two fics where Arthur lived. It would have been nice for Arthur to be there for Jon as he grew up.
alexandrathorn chapter 1 . 6/19
BRUH im already crying at the first chapter. i love this concept and im so excited to keep reading even though it do be five in the morning3
Wiwerse chapter 31 . 3/17
i write this knowing that there is little chance of the sequel ever being written
however i intend to keep your account in my following department for no less than 10 years. know that if you tarry no less than the year of 2030 you will have at least one reader
Clavyus chapter 31 . 10/28/2019
A great read. Well drawn characters, compelling drama and an interesting plot. Hope the author finds the energy to add to the picture.
Guest chapter 31 . 8/25/2019
I can not see Willas killing Shireen. But,...
Guest chapter 30 . 8/25/2019
Harold Harding is Heir to the Vale after Robin Arryn. No Stark could inherit. Only someone of Arryn blood. After that it would be a Royce as decendants of the old Kings of the Vale.
Guest chapter 27 . 8/25/2019
The pain of a parent's loss never goes away fully. Sometimes it sneeks up on you. I lost my Dad in 1970. It got easier with time but it can still hit at unexpected times. Best wishes.
Guest chapter 25 . 8/25/2019
As sad as it might be it is just as well Loras is dead. Only Liras ever held Renly's heart. This way Arrianne has no real competition for her husband.
HaywireEagle chapter 15 . 8/25/2019
Dawn is not Valeryian steel. It is forged from a fallen star and pale as milkglass. Not dark and cloudy like the ancestral swords of other houses.
HaywireEagle chapter 13 . 8/25/2019
I know this is finished, but I can't help but think of Jon taking a name of his own. Starkfall or Dawnstark. Something of that nature. A way of appealing both South and North in equal measure. That's just me though. A decent idea for another story.
HaywireEagle chapter 11 . 8/25/2019
Hmm, a bit iffy on having to kill Sandor. Man was a cunt, but he knew better and when to yield. Unlike Gregor. He hated the bastards anyway and would have probably been more than a bit amused by the whole thing.
HaywireEagle chapter 3 . 8/25/2019
You're using nee' wrong. It'd be best if you'd take that out completely if only to keep you from using a over used and over abused indicator.

The Westerosi don't even use it anyway so getting rid of it fits the aesthetic of ASoIaF
Guest chapter 19 . 8/23/2019
It should be pointed out that people of the other Classes arrainged marriages as well; merchants to other merchants or producers, landed Knights to Landed Knights etc. Farmers to other farm families as well.
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