I am going back and rereading all the early fics.
This first chapter is beautiful. :)

Such a wonderful depiction of raw and conflicting emotions, Phyrne and Jack rending apart in order to meld together again, angst, rejection, loss, reconciliation, and finally the acceptance of love and it's dark, painful side. A joy, a pleasure and a sometimes breathless read. Thank you.

Quite, quite perfect. Kudos.

Cailin Rua

I just found this through Tumblr and devoured the entire thing in one go. It is so beautifull written, so evocative and emotionally true. Tender and aching, funny and tense, really really wonderful. It builds on and adds to the show in a way that adds dimensions. Thank you for sharing this gift!

Beautiful! Great writing! Love how you developed P&J' relationship during the episodes. Almost can see it on TV, but they missed shooting it.

LOVED THIS! Yes worth shouting!

This is bloody poetry. Almost wept. Thank you.

Very well written!

Thank YOU for writing this! It's not just that the story itself is excellent, your writing is so eloquent that even a rubbish plot would be a joy to read.

And I'm so glad she did the noble thing.

Amazingly well put together with the episodes. Your language is such a beautiful mix of long, elaborate, feather light sentences and short statements that hit me like a ton of bricks. In a good way.
You capture their utter agony of keeping their love hidden from both the world and, sometimes, each other with words that physically hurts. Thank you for a lovely story.

Absolutely perfect from start to finish. This whole story is like a wonderfully long poem.
Thank you so much for sharing.

Magnificent. Thank you so much. I will read this again, now it's complete, and enjoy it once more. You are a wonderful writer.

Oh yes, the journey has certainly been worth the wait. You write so beautifully - will you write more, please.

Such a beautiful story :)

How pleased I was to see notification of your final chapter sitting in my inbox. Your take on P&J is outstanding, your way with words unsurpassed. This was so gentle, yet so so strong. You write beautifully, don't stop.