Oh no

What the hell is happening

And here I thought this story would have a happy ending for Mulan. Great story though!

This is well-written, but is not true to the characters at all. Aurora would never abandon Mulan like that! And Mulan wouldn't give in to Malifecent like that. Your idea of the characters was just very wrong and a bit unsettling.

that was not the ending i expected... but i loved it!

I liked the ending as much as I can like a not exactly happy ending. And hey, she might be evil, but at least it looks like shes gonna be able to have some awesome lesbian sex with Elsa for a long while. I also admit that I was happy to see Robin, Snow, and Charming die lol.

Wow, just read this story from the beginning to the end. I really really liked it. I wonder if you'll do a sequel or maybe a short story/one shot using the same backstory and characters.

An evil hero. Not completely evil, but definitely a hero

Hello there! I found this fic searching for something in the SleepingWarrior ship and I was honestly not disappointed. I loved the hints of SwanQueen, the references at Elsa's (and Maleficient's) sexuality, and in a general sense, it was well-written. Somehow, in spite of its flaws, this managed to be one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. I especially like that Aurora's actual feelings about it aren't explicitly said, more or less implied, leaving the readers with the same lack of complete closure as Mulan.
Now, since I'm also a writer, and I know many of us are looking for opportunities to improve, I'd like to give you a couple pointers:
1) A lot of things seemed to happen really abruptly. I would have liked to see more build-up to plot points, like a more detailed progression of Mulan's descent to darkness, Belle's death (actually, just more detail on the whole heart scene would have been wonderful)- and probably a few other things I'm not thinking of specifically right at the moment. I know plot build-up is really difficult and I'm definitely not 100% at it myself; it's hard to strike that delicate balance between "keep the action going" and "make the readers care about the action."
2) Since Maleficient isn't a really well-known character, Elsa's barely been introduced and Mulan and Aurora are side-characters at best, you had a lot of freedom with their characters. Unfortunately, I just can't see Snow or Charming abandoning Emma ever. I understand the point of view with them being from medieval times, but I still just can't see it, so the ending became rather flimsy.
3) Just in general, I wish there was more to this story. It was, as I said, well-written in general and I would definitely have liked to see more of your head-cannon reasons behind Elsa and Maleficient's "villain" alignment. This is a really great plot line and I think you definitely have the potential to do a lot more with it if you ever want to add.

This was a lot of the badness of the show exposed, which was great. On the other hand, sadsicles and there was no integration/reconcilliation which is a bit hopeless :(

This story was epic.

Yes Elsa and Mulan now that is a interesting paring.

I love this story soooo much.

I'm not sure how i feel about these two chapters. Mulan giving in so easily to Maleficent kinda makes it seem like getting to have sex trumped her morals. It wasnt even a long seduction, and its kinda hard to imagine Mulan the warrior so staunch in her beliefs, would just toss them away so easily.

Whaaattt? I guess it is clever that she thought of that, but still its a little hard to imagine Mulan going to those lengths.