Whoa... please make a sequel or something...

you gonna continue this? I love the idea of shinobu and hiro sneaking around. I'd love to read it

I clicked on this because of the odd pairing, and after reading, I'm genuinely curious about these two. I like stories about forbidden relationships, and I've never read a Shinobu/Hiroki before, so its a nice change of pace. Their relationship is already really intimate, so it makes me wonder how long this affair's been going on. The Hiroki you wrote is very affectionate (I like it), and Shinobu too.

Are you leaving this as is, or are you planning on doing a multi-chapter story? I don't want to alert your story without knowing and then be disappointed if you say 'no' so...

Loved it are you going to put it into an actual story or just a one shot