Reviews for Next To You |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I just read your entire story in one day... Definitely my most favorite! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I think this is the BEST au I have read for a KP story! I am so anxious and can't put it down! Most other stories have them fall in lovebe together almost immediately... Amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() If Peeta and Rye are fighting that badly... she should just lay them both! Would that give Peeta an attitude adjustment and further stroke Rye's ego! |
![]() ![]() ![]() And... they're breaking up. Because the lovemaking went wrong. God, don't do this to me! Get them back together! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now she is holding him in bed. This is progressing quickly... When are they gonna start having sex? |
![]() ![]() ![]() They're texting now! Great... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Madge screwed Rye? But he's cheating on Katniss! Isn't he? And she doesn't seem to care! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So why is Rye asking Katniss for her opinion on the attractiveness of other women? I thought he and she were together! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK, Katniss, would it kill you to let Johanna finish her sentences? Peeta is what? Rye is what? I have to know! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A fic with Katniss in a love triangle between Peeta and Rye Mellark? sign me the freak UP! Can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The paragraph that Katniss is reassuring Peeta that he would be a great father is very well written...I could totally imagine that this issue would be a fear of Peeta's since he had a terrible childhood and with having PTSD from the torture. I really enjoyed reading that paragraph! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. You really could continue with a second part. Make it a few years in the future. Katniss and Peeta are expecting their first child and his mother comes back. Maybe she's already gone to Rye once and now Peeta is trying to protect Katniss by keeping her in the dark about her coming back. I would like to see what actually happened to his evil mother. There's so much you could add. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! I love your dark moody Peeta! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this so much. This story makes me happy |
![]() ![]() fantastic story! |