Reviews for Figure on the Ice
Guest chapter 1 . 2/1
this story was cool, I really liked it and how it was written, good job!
sondowth chapter 1 . 1/1/2019
Please update this story
Wika0304 chapter 1 . 7/1/2018
please update
andjelija.nenic chapter 1 . 6/5/2018
Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$
Guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2018
I would love to read more!
Robby the Cyber Warrior chapter 1 . 4/27/2018
Ok, this is REALLy cool! Do you plan on doing more? If so, I'd love to see it
Divine Protector of Skyrim chapter 1 . 10/7/2017
This is amazing. I’ve never read or seen a story where Harry (or a FemHarry) be a child of a minor god and is pretty much an Adult. I hope you will be able to continue this soon.
Drachenreiter1 chapter 1 . 1/11/2017
Really interesting story. I hope you'll come back to it at some point (the sooner the better ;) )
Guest chapter 1 . 11/27/2016
I'm guessing she dumped him for changed. Him going down a dark path were she can not. More chapters please
cruciosirius chapter 1 . 8/20/2016
Did you abandoned it? I want to read more
CrystalVixen93 chapter 1 . 7/30/2016
Can't wait to see what happens next so I hope you update again soon plz.
Kshail chapter 1 . 7/15/2016
Well this looks good first time I've seen a story where the mc is the child of a minor god. I can't say I know my mythology so I don't know who her mother is...incidentally this is also the first one where James is the one who cheated on Lily instead of vise-versa. Hope this continues ...but I'm doubtful.
Foxy Engineer chapter 1 . 5/28/2016
Pleasewrite more.
amata0221 chapter 1 . 12/5/2015
Love the chapter, please continue writing this.
PikaMew1288 chapter 1 . 11/27/2015
A magical girl named Evangeline who controls Ice. You basically turned Harry into a dumber version of the Dark Evangel (Evangeline would not let herself be killed by someone like Voldemort or would have been immune to the killing curse due to her mastering Magea Erebia [I think that it is how it was spelled] and become immortal because of it) aka Evangeline A.K. Mcdowell from Negima. Too bad that she does not have the perks that come with being Evangeline. I can't wait to see how her presence effects things. Hope you update soon.
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