This was an epic story, that I read from beginning to end. Sometimes its great to be able to do that, much like a real short story. So much detail, and never over the top. Each character seemed to have their moment and I loved your new characters. Really couldn't put this down. Thanks and I'm thrilled you have other work to look at as well.

Really enjoying this.

Amazing. Absolutely amazing plot and writing style! Your action scenes were more colorful than most movie scenes and the dialogue was spot on. I also loved the villain, great job there. I do wish there would have been a longer epilogue. Or more chapters, it was just too good to end.

LOVE Aramis and bromance so cant wait to read

Great story, but the ending was a bit rushed. Still, nicely done.

Like that you told the same scene from varying view points. Made it interesting.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHh THAT WAS AMAZING! I was on the edge of my seat. You win.

Brilliant

Awr :) I love the part about retelling. Well done.

Great. Though I would like the epilogue more descriptive, longer.
I loved the display of emotions between Aramis and Porthos. They are so protective!
Good that Treville let escape by nightfall ;) it was very in character.
Sad that this wonderful story is finished.
Maybe a few longer scene from epilogue could you write?
Thank you for sharing this amazing story!

Thanks for the conclusion! It was an story and I can't wait for the next one! :)

Yay! This was a great story- thanks so much for writing it! :)

It was enormously satisfying that it was Aramis who fired that shot. I think he suffered most out of all of them during this ordeal. He was never going to wait behind while his brothers were in danger. Thank you for this story.

Really well written chapter. Good ending.

This has been the most fabulously written story and I've looked forward to every chapter. A part of me is very sad that it's over. You have a real talent for succinct and imaginative writing and I'm waiting for more of your writing with anticipation