Reviews for Early Retirement
bebepantheon chapter 1 . 7/6
What is the sequel called? Will Steve ever finds out?
Grubby92 chapter 1 . 3/23
What? There is no where near as much of this story as there should be. Still very good.
Jestersky98 chapter 1 . 2/18
Well this is pathetic, one of the worst possible kinds of MoD stories
A MoD who's weak and angsty
KnowInsight chapter 1 . 2/13
wow this could go places, but I sure enjoyed where it did go.
tigersmeleth chapter 1 . 1/22
So much fun!
Revan Nonaka chapter 1 . 12/16/2019
woman is singular
women is plural.
just for your information.
petalssunwards chapter 1 . 8/29/2019
sooo cool
Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2019
Love
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2019
I'm wondering how long before she tells Steve she's lady griffin. I hope no weasleys or anyone from magical Great Britain is in this story. More chapters please
ExcaliburStuckInMyStoneHeart chapter 1 . 6/11/2019
it was a good end! but i kinda need a part two
apeljohn chapter 1 . 12/23/2018
I very much like the writing style. Less impressed by the plot - if you introduce a new character to canon and nothing important changes, what was the point?
shubaduba chapter 1 . 10/22/2018
soooo what exactly did she do? Her role was minimal, she wasn't needed at all. She didn't really do much magic. I was hoping for an epic magic battle between Cathryn and Loki but there was none. Disappointing.
hjcallipygian chapter 1 . 6/19/2018
This was fun! I expected there to be more for some reason, and was sad to only see the one chapter. But this is great and I'm glad I got what I got!
Monster King chapter 1 . 3/27/2018
Great story I really liked it good job writing the story.
Altiria-Aty chapter 1 . 2/18/2018
But- BUT! Did Steve ever find out about her? ah this was so good, I loved Harry in this she was so boss!
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