A girl with schizophrenia wants to end her life. I want to expand it to a chapter book please tell me what you think and what i could do better thank you:-)

Well I'm basically trying to say is listen to your parents and don't do drugs. P.s. I'm sorry if this isn't even in the right category/content. I'm still new and this is my first story.

Conflicts of the first letter.

I hope to go somewhere with this story someday. I will update my story almost every week. My work is copywrited, you need to ask me first if you are going to use it.

When Saniago was killed, he still didn't know why the Vicario brothers wanted to murder him. In the afterlife, he is given a chance to find out the reason why. might get edited soon, stupid English class

The death of Santiago Nasar from Pedro Vicario's point of view.